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		<title>Comment on Carding-a beginning to ordering woolly thoughts? by Susan B.</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/24/carding-woolly-thoughts/#comment-1537</link>
		<dc:creator>Susan B.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 12:28:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Faye!  Having notes in a lot of different places is definitely a problem for me, especially as I get older.  I&#039;m enjoying the cards already as I feel free to go ahead take a moment to note down those ideas and bits of dialogue, even when I&#039;m supposed to be working on something else, without trying to find the right document where I&#039;ll be able to find it again.  The coupon file is a great idea, thank you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Faye!  Having notes in a lot of different places is definitely a problem for me, especially as I get older.  I&#8217;m enjoying the cards already as I feel free to go ahead take a moment to note down those ideas and bits of dialogue, even when I&#8217;m supposed to be working on something else, without trying to find the right document where I&#8217;ll be able to find it again.  The coupon file is a great idea, thank you!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Carding-a beginning to ordering woolly thoughts? by Faye Quam Heimerl</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/24/carding-woolly-thoughts/#comment-1528</link>
		<dc:creator>Faye Quam Heimerl</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Jan 2009 22:10:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Susan B., 

Like you, I&#039;ve been resistant to using index cards--seems like still another thing to keep track of--but then I attended an Anne Lamott talk, in which she said she uses index cards to jot down snippets of dialogue, titles, images, and notes for lines that may go into her current writing projects. I still wasn&#039;t convinced this was a good idea, and I kept inserting my notes in my journals; but then recently I couldn&#039;t remember which, of many, journals I used to record a reference.  I spent way too much time going through journals, but eventually found it. 

Now? I still put most of what I want to remember in my journals, but I&#039;m encouraging myself to use index cards. Bought a bright pink $1.00 accordion coupon file at Target to put them in. Nice an loud so it won&#039;t get lost in my bag. 

Perhaps this method will work for the different novels you&#039;re working on. 

Have fun!

Faye Quam Heimerl - Letters From the Editor www.FayeQuamHeimerl.wordpress.com</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Susan B., </p>
<p>Like you, I&#8217;ve been resistant to using index cards&#8211;seems like still another thing to keep track of&#8211;but then I attended an Anne Lamott talk, in which she said she uses index cards to jot down snippets of dialogue, titles, images, and notes for lines that may go into her current writing projects. I still wasn&#8217;t convinced this was a good idea, and I kept inserting my notes in my journals; but then recently I couldn&#8217;t remember which, of many, journals I used to record a reference.  I spent way too much time going through journals, but eventually found it. </p>
<p>Now? I still put most of what I want to remember in my journals, but I&#8217;m encouraging myself to use index cards. Bought a bright pink $1.00 accordion coupon file at Target to put them in. Nice an loud so it won&#8217;t get lost in my bag. </p>
<p>Perhaps this method will work for the different novels you&#8217;re working on. </p>
<p>Have fun!</p>
<p>Faye Quam Heimerl &#8211; Letters From the Editor <a href="http://www.FayeQuamHeimerl.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.FayeQuamHeimerl.wordpress.com</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on You lost me. by I Was A Copy Editor In A Past Life &#124; Murder &#38; Magnolias</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/10/you-lost-me/#comment-1462</link>
		<dc:creator>I Was A Copy Editor In A Past Life &#124; Murder &#38; Magnolias</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Jan 2009 17:47:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] of me certainly mourns my ability to just immerse myself in story for the sake of story.  Pot was talking about this yesterday on her blog in the [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on You lost me. by Susan B.</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/10/you-lost-me/#comment-1457</link>
		<dc:creator>Susan B.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 23:04:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I also know I&#039;m more likely to &quot;excuse&quot; slow starts in older books.  Sometimes I check the copyright and if it&#039;s an 80&#039;s book then I&#039;ll brace for more flowery language and hope for the best that it will pick up.

But this book was fairly recent and it seems like everyone&#039;s supposed to know now that it&#039;s all short-attention-span theater out there.  I&#039;m sorry, you have an average length of the span between commercials to grab my attention.  It&#039;s the way I was trained.

The meandering is also something to I tend see as another common Chick-Lit trait.  It&#039;s not about the destination, it&#039;s about the journey.  Yadda yadda yadda.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I also know I&#8217;m more likely to &#8220;excuse&#8221; slow starts in older books.  Sometimes I check the copyright and if it&#8217;s an 80&#8217;s book then I&#8217;ll brace for more flowery language and hope for the best that it will pick up.</p>
<p>But this book was fairly recent and it seems like everyone&#8217;s supposed to know now that it&#8217;s all short-attention-span theater out there.  I&#8217;m sorry, you have an average length of the span between commercials to grab my attention.  It&#8217;s the way I was trained.</p>
<p>The meandering is also something to I tend see as another common Chick-Lit trait.  It&#8217;s not about the destination, it&#8217;s about the journey.  Yadda yadda yadda.</p>
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		<title>Comment on You lost me. by Kait Nolan</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/10/you-lost-me/#comment-1456</link>
		<dc:creator>Kait Nolan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 22:53:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>:) I think I used to have a lot more tolerance for a slow build up.  I also used to have a lot more time to read in general.  Not so much anymore.  I want my valuable time to get something worthwhile and long meandering anythings aren&#039;t it anymore.  Which is probably why I rarely read those epic fantasy type stories (though I love watching them in movie or TV form).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p> <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  I think I used to have a lot more tolerance for a slow build up.  I also used to have a lot more time to read in general.  Not so much anymore.  I want my valuable time to get something worthwhile and long meandering anythings aren&#8217;t it anymore.  Which is probably why I rarely read those epic fantasy type stories (though I love watching them in movie or TV form).</p>
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		<title>Comment on You lost me. by Susan B.</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/10/you-lost-me/#comment-1455</link>
		<dc:creator>Susan B.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 22:49:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>P.S. You should know I&#039;ve always had a problem with this in particular because who&#039;s the one always saying: where are you going with this?  how does this advance the story?  etc.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>P.S. You should know I&#8217;ve always had a problem with this in particular because who&#8217;s the one always saying: where are you going with this?  how does this advance the story?  etc.</p>
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		<title>Comment on You lost me. by Susan B.</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/10/you-lost-me/#comment-1454</link>
		<dc:creator>Susan B.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 22:48:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think that&#039;s true of something things in my reading, but I have always been irritated by a story going nowhere.  There are some authors who pull it off by having &lt;i&gt;something&lt;/i&gt; to keep me reading--a great voice, an exceptionally interesting character, a prologue that promised a fascinating answer later on...this had none of those things.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think that&#8217;s true of something things in my reading, but I have always been irritated by a story going nowhere.  There are some authors who pull it off by having <i>something</i> to keep me reading&#8211;a great voice, an exceptionally interesting character, a prologue that promised a fascinating answer later on&#8230;this had none of those things.</p>
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		<title>Comment on You lost me. by Kait Nolan</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/10/you-lost-me/#comment-1453</link>
		<dc:creator>Kait Nolan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 22:39:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Do you ever wonder if the fact that we&#039;re writers has really impacted our ability to just enjoy a book as is without trying to analyze it?  I keep thinking of everything I read &quot;oh s/he shouldn&#039;t have done that&quot; or &quot;that could have been done better&quot;.  Particularly as I learn more about craft.  After reading GMC and all of Alex Sokoloff&#039;s posts on the three act structure and all this stuff on urgency, I have a similar lack of tolerance for this kind of meandering beginning.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Do you ever wonder if the fact that we&#8217;re writers has really impacted our ability to just enjoy a book as is without trying to analyze it?  I keep thinking of everything I read &#8220;oh s/he shouldn&#8217;t have done that&#8221; or &#8220;that could have been done better&#8221;.  Particularly as I learn more about craft.  After reading GMC and all of Alex Sokoloff&#8217;s posts on the three act structure and all this stuff on urgency, I have a similar lack of tolerance for this kind of meandering beginning.</p>
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		<title>Comment on All talk; no action&#8230; by Kait Nolan</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2009/01/08/all-talk-no-action/#comment-1446</link>
		<dc:creator>Kait Nolan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Jan 2009 17:56:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>And you say I&#039;m the one who&#039;s prone to self analysis. :D  

I think we&#039;re both getting to the point where we&#039;re able to think more objectively about what our story needs.  I know I&#039;ve been trying really hard to get past all the &quot;and then and then&quot; by all my various and sundry plotting methods, and I feel like I learned a lot from GMC that will help me have legitimate reason behind what happens.  And some of those questions--like that&#039;s the thing that makes my h/h finally stop resisting each other--may not be answered until I&#039;m further into the story.  But I feel like in other areas, I&#039;m getting better anyway.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And you say I&#8217;m the one who&#8217;s prone to self analysis. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' />   </p>
<p>I think we&#8217;re both getting to the point where we&#8217;re able to think more objectively about what our story needs.  I know I&#8217;ve been trying really hard to get past all the &#8220;and then and then&#8221; by all my various and sundry plotting methods, and I feel like I learned a lot from GMC that will help me have legitimate reason behind what happens.  And some of those questions&#8211;like that&#8217;s the thing that makes my h/h finally stop resisting each other&#8211;may not be answered until I&#8217;m further into the story.  But I feel like in other areas, I&#8217;m getting better anyway.</p>
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		<title>Comment on How Blogging Has Helped My Writing by Susan B.</title>
		<link>http://susanbischoff.wordpress.com/2007/07/15/how-blogging-has-helped-my-writing/#comment-1445</link>
		<dc:creator>Susan B.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Jan 2009 16:11:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s an abbreviation for the working title of a story I was writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s an abbreviation for the working title of a story I was writing.</p>
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